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2012-11-06 [Lepellier]: She just turned the entire second floor black, no?
2012-11-06 [Figgy]: Yep, no lights. She fried that system XD
IN THE HALLWAYS ONLY
There, Dur.
2012-11-06 [Lepellier]: Ok, so the Kitchen is good.
2012-11-06 [Figgy]: Wait, no kitchen power goes down too XD
2012-11-06 [Figgy]: And music room.
2012-11-06 [Lepellier]: Ahh, drat. lol
2012-11-06 [Duredhel]: It'll just be for a few minutes XD.
2012-11-06 [XxTsomexX]: Without realising what was happening, Jonas ran right into Justin and fell on top of him. He looked down quickly to apologize, but he saw that Justin's body didn't have a head. He forgot everything he ever knew in that moment, mostly about Justin's powers with portals. He quickly scrambled off him, his back pressed up against the nearest wall, unable to utter a single word in his terror.
2012-11-07 [twitchboy]: jonas' head is the one thats outside
2012-11-07 [Figgy]: Whoahhh, okay, that's powerplaying. Can't do that :/
2012-11-07 [twitchboy]: fine then
2012-11-07 [Duredhel]: Yeeep.. unless you guys planned this ahead of time, you can't determine what happens to the other person's character.
The post would have to be something like this;
Justin's outstretched hand was hit by Jonas as the boy rushed out of the music room. Justin let out a surprised yelp as he was barrelled over and crumpled back into a heap. The collision settled with Justin on his rear. If Jonas kept going he would end up with his head sitting outside on the other side of the portal floating above the mansion.
That way Jonas' player can still decide where Jonas ends up.
2012-11-07 [Flisky]: If you use the fight in the west hall between Mihir and Anthony as an example...Evo typed that Anthony kicked Mihir in the testicles, and I posted that his kick hit his thigh instead and threw fireballs at Anthony. Evo decided that they hit. I think it's a pretty good example of not powerplaying..
2012-11-07 [twitchboy]: Iv been rp for a while i know a power play. He was barrelling headlong down the highway into my outstretched hand it was almost intentional but i just went with it. I apologise but at least it wasnt a fight powerplay or something of the like.
2012-11-07 [Figgy]: Doesn't matter, if Tsome doesn't like it, it needs to be redone XD If she's okay with it, then whatever.
2012-11-07 [Duredhel]: No need to get defensive :>. Stuff like that can be done, just, check with the player first and let us know, doing it here in the comments is enough.
2012-11-07 [twitchboy]: already withdrawn the power post any how, now i just wait lol. Sorry i bit heated at the moment. I had a few friends who are bragging about the election and when i asked why they supported who they did they could only sight ads and did no research themselves so yeah im steamed at the moment. not so much at who won but at how they won. It confounds me just how many Americans don't acre to actually research their representative
2012-11-07 [The Past]: Woah woah! Now now, no politics here, that would just be messy, unless it's for Mags of course: http://textfro
2012-11-07 [AccountUnavaili able]: Will wait on Jonas before Lucas comes out.
2012-11-07 [XxTsomexX]: Would my post still be okay? I misread it as Justin's head being the one. Jonas probably would've blanked out on Justin's powers, especially with his happenings in the music room. :3
2012-11-07 [Duredhel]: If you're ok with it, it'll be fine :> I'll put it up.
2012-11-07 [XxTsomexX]: Thank you :) if he were anything like me, I would've probably looped my pants in this situation. Graphic, but no lie.
2012-11-07 [twitchboy]: ok guys im back and i have cooled my heels
2012-11-07 [Figgy]: Let's say the sun is setting at this point since it's November and nearly 7 pm, so he's still getting brigh ass sunlight to the face, which hurts, but it's not broad daylight outside XD
2012-11-07 [XxTsomexX]: Should be a Lucas post now since hes stuck in limbo
2012-11-08 [Flisky]: Bahaha! *more laughing*
2012-11-08 [Flisky]: Quick post and he's out of the hall. :)
2012-11-08 [Evolution X]: So who are the 'boys' around here again?
2012-11-08 [Duredhel]: Justin, Lucas and Jonas. They're doing their own thing, though, so Anthony can just go by without having to interact with them.
2012-11-09 [twitchboy]: waiting on jonas
2012-11-09 [XxTsomexX]: I'm waiting on Lucas...
2012-11-09 [Duredhel]: hopefully Valera will be online tomorrow >,>.
have you thought about how you're gonna introduce your new char, Twitch? It'd be interesting to plot with Flisk and Valera about that. Like... she could, for example, show up at the mansion with the location of the lab they can go explore.
2012-11-09 [twitchboy]: first shes going to wander until she glomps Flisky for a slight reunion but yes she knows the location of the remnants of the lab for a story line
2012-11-09 [Flisky]: Addy will be so totally excited, too.
2012-11-09 [Duredhel]: Aye :O. Maybe she could show up first thing during the next in-game day? So Lucas and Addy can go with her to the lab shortly after?
2012-11-09 [twitchboy]: sounds good
2012-11-09 [XxTsomexX]: Jonas stood up from his spot on the floor, staying relatively close to the wall. He felt an immense relief wash over him when the power went back on. Since his questions went unanswered, he figured he pucker out this time. Since the two guys were so engrossed in their own conversation, he planned to wander around a bit himself, to see what he could get into. That is, until Light came down the stairs. He could feel the electricity vomit off the girl, and it suddenly made him a little nervous. He relaxed when she left and shook his head. "I should probably stay away from her...." he mumbled, looking around slightly. He gave a small wave to Lucas and Justin before he headed down into X-men Foyer.
2012-11-09 [AccountUnavaili able]: My physics is rusty... bear with me.
2012-11-10 [twitchboy]: PORTALS TO THE MOON!
2012-11-10 [twitchboy]: but yes more energy = bigger, longer lasting, farther away portals
2012-11-11 [Duredhel]: Caleb needs to get here first :O
2012-11-11 [Duredhel]: Uhhm... do we wait on people here or do we keep going? :<
2012-11-11 [AccountUnavaili able]: I was waiting for Justin but I could post a quick reaction to Daniela?
2012-11-11 [Duredhel]: Yush, let's do that. Twitch can catch up a bit after.
When you have something that's gonna draw out, it's always better to not do it in a transitional area (for example, a hallway) but in a final area instead (for example a bedroom or kitchen :>). That way people just passing through don't get caught up in it.
2012-11-12 [twitchboy]: I was waiting on shade but just realised he has already passed
2012-11-12 [Duredhel]: No prob :> feel free to post now so we can move on.
2012-11-13 [Duredhel]: *waits*
2012-11-13 [The Black Goat]: Calebs room is 216 I think
2012-11-13 [Duredhel]: Whoops, I'm on phone, could someone ammend my post so Dani mentioned 216 too?
2012-11-13 [Figgy]: Juan Diego Dianderas said:
dude...
Caleb and Dani is like...
he's hunting for a deer and the deer stops
lays down on the floor
and puts ketchup on itself
[Duredhel], ladies and gentlemen..
2012-11-13 [XxTsomexX]: That is absolutely beautiful.
2012-11-13 [The Black Goat]: What a thoughtful deer ^^
2012-11-13 [Duredhel]: >> Caleb isn't pulling any punches. I didn't realize that would be a chance for him to use his powers on Dani, swear to god XD.
2012-11-13 [Figgy]: Archived.
2012-11-14 [The Black Goat]: That's right little deer, just climb into into my truck so I can take you home and eat.. ermmm....... feed you......
2012-11-15 [XxTsomexX]: Endelyn's head poked out from the kitchen, but that was all. "Hello? Do you know what's going on?" She asked, not sure who had asked, since it was hard to see with the red lighting.
2012-11-15 [XxTsomexX]: Mihir post?
2012-11-16 [XxTsomexX]: ... we need a Mihir post..
2012-11-16 [XxTsomexX]: Endelyn came fully out of the kitchen. She stared in Mihir's direction. "Come now, save your energy." She said. She noticed the hall filling with people and cleared her throat. "Everyone!" She called out. "Just try to stay calm. It may seem bad, but I'm sure everything will be alright. Let's go see what's going on, shall we? It could be fun." She yelled out to everyone, trying to be nice and to stay optimistic.
2012-11-16 [Lirerial]: Yea, I'm not posting anymore until he does :p
2012-11-16 [Flisky]: I haven't been home all day. :(
2012-11-16 [Duredhel]: ,>
Tis not dark.
Lights are on guys, they're just.. red.
2012-11-16 [Lepellier]: I'mma wait for Flisk to edit so I know what I'm working with...
2012-11-16 [Duredhel]: I have the theory that Mihir's default reaction is lighting on fire 8> like those goats that faint at stuff.
2012-11-16 [Lepellier]: You know, I almost feel like Nathan gets a slight streak of that too... Except, his isn't really fire...It just looks like it
2012-11-16 [Flisky]: Yep. Dur has it right. Mihir, when stressed, starts himself on fire.
2012-11-17 [XxTsomexX]: Catherine post?
2012-11-17 [Lepellier]: So...we're supposed to take the elevators, as Dani takes the stairs. Makes sense...
2012-11-17 [Duredhel]: She's going somewhere else.
2012-11-18 [Flisky]: People can post their characters hitching a ride with Mihir.
2012-11-18 [Lirerial]: Seeing Caleb in the middle of all this comotion is going to give Lire a heart attack lol
2012-11-18 [Flisky]: Just post her getting down to the complex. ^_^
2012-11-18 [Lirerial]: Already did lol
2012-11-18 [Flisky]: Yeah, I saw that after I commented.
2012-11-18 [Roma]: Goddamn steamrolled post X(
2012-11-18 [The Black Goat]: Caleb joined in with the others in the elevator, curious as to wear this was heading. He hoped to catch up with sexy Lire as well, however unhappy she'd been to see him.
2012-11-18 [Roma]: I put my Vlad post after that one since he has to wait.
2012-11-18 [ZeoOfFire]: Catherine was still scared of the flame, moreso as it grew, but breathed in deeply, and followed it, and everyone else to the claustrophobic elevator. Luckily she knew enough of the people there, but didn't notice Guy, hidden behind other bodies.
2012-11-18 [Duredhel]: ....Isn't Lire supposed to be a world class assassin with an immunity to Caleb's powers? XD
2012-11-18 [The Black Goat]: Yes, but she isnt afraid of him as much as shes afraid of him telling other people what he knows
2012-11-18 [Duredhel]: Aye aye. Yeah, I was gonna say it'd be interesting to see how Lire handles Caleb, since I always figured she was supposed to be baddass.
2012-11-18 [The Black Goat]: maybe Caleb's just too damn sexy lmao
2012-11-20 [XxTsomexX]: As Zeke and Tobias came down from the third floor, Tobias sniffed a spot for a few moments before walking towards the kitchen. "I hope you're not thinking about food. I just fed you this morning, since you woke me up at six just to feed you, jerk." Zeke said to the dog with a slijtly annoyed tone. Tobias however paid his grumpy owner no mind as he led her intoX-men Kitchen 2nd.
2012-12-30 [Dwarf Ronin]: I'll post when I reach the ground. Trying to type on a airplane is such a pain.
2012-12-31 [Figgy]: Uhm, dude... like, honestly, really fucking honestly, I think the way you write and portray Guy is WAY more dramatic and less realistic than it should be. I'm not trying to be mean, but I think that might be what your problem is with really getting him off the ground here.
Okay, how about, Dur and I, whenever we see something you could improve, begin commenting on it? Right now, I think what you should do if put yourself in Guy's shoes, think of what you as a real person would realistically do. Would you seriously walk out of the kitchen after being happy and then suddenly start sobbing because you're 'cursed'? Or would you walk out a little more confidently, maybe go check out the place downstairs, go to the library or lounge or media room or something? I mean, I don't want to force you to write or post a certain way, but I do think it needs to be something a bit more realistic. At this point, Guy seems drastically bi-polar. When Dur gave a suggestion, he didn't mean completely turn his personality around XD He only meant to make him seem more real. If you want to PM me about it, I can try to help you out.
2013-01-02 [Roma]: All right. Let's have Guy run into Vlad. Literally.
2013-01-03 [Dwarf Ronin]: Did I do that right?
2013-01-03 [Roma]: I'm pretty sure that getting bumped into by Vlad would probably feel like hitting a brick wall, or would spin him around or something since he got him on the shoulder. And then Casper came and crashed into the back of him, probably sending him back into Vlad's chest...
Maybe I'm being too dramatic here, but that was such a tame response :O
2013-01-03 [Dwarf Ronin]: I adjusted. I have said before, sorry for my lackluster...I
2013-01-03 [Figgy]: And we are here to to help.
2013-01-03 [Dwarf Ronin]: and I thank you. I hope my adjustment was slightly better?
2013-01-04 [Roma]: In need of a Casper post to get things rolling here.
2013-01-07 [Roma]: Casper!
2013-01-07 [Dwarf Ronin]: I know right lol
2013-01-08 [Figgy]: Wouldn't it just be segueing?
2013-01-11 [Lepellier]: Hey Twitch...I think your post ended up in the wrong place...
2013-01-12 [The Black Goat]: "please walk into my portal! I WANT YOU TO ENTER MY PORTAL!!!"
"ummm.... no."
2013-01-12 [XxTsomexX]: Pretty much :P
2013-01-12 [The Black Goat]: what if its a portal to a secret torture/sex chamber lol
2013-01-12 [XxTsomexX]: Zeke would still probably be like: "Intersting... I'll still take the elevator."
2013-01-14 [twitchboy]: short post nothing to do about that besides resolve the portal action
2013-01-25 [Figgy]: Zeke? Justin?
2013-02-12 [The Black Goat]: Sam post?
2013-02-13 [Figgy]: SAO? SAMUEL???
2013-02-13 [Lepellier]: Sam is such a lump on a log. I kinda love it. (Yes, he's meant to be absolutely this dry.)
2013-02-13 [Figgy]: Oh I know. I can see the character personality very clearly XD
Also, probably gonna skip Sao here.
2013-02-13 [Lepellier]: He'll probably drop his guard a little bit after being in the mansion for a while. He's just a bit (rather) cranky.
2013-02-13 [The Black Goat]: Sasaiya was a little startled by the sudden attention. She certainly hadn't intended to attract it. "Hold on I'm a little queasy. Motion sickness..." She told Miles while whooshing her tail back and forth for the benefit of the nice hispanic girl with the slit pupils. Her head rolled toward the woman, who seemed concerned, and she licked the hand that had rubbed her neck. "I forgot how much hate elevators." As her stomach beagn to settle she rolled back onto her feet and lightly tossed her head. "Let's go." she gave one last look and a grateful sort of nod to Lire before trotting after Shana into the x-men east 2nd.
2013-02-15 [Lirerial]: Lire watched wistfully as the dog followed Miles down the hall then turned her attention back to Sao. "That.... is a really good question." She said as she glanced after Shana, "Maybe we should follow them for a while." She said as she glanced at him and smiled, "That bag looks heavy as hell."She commented as she wandered down x-men east 2nd
2013-02-19 [Figgy]: LIMBO LIMBO LIMBO NO NO NO
2013-02-19 [Lirerial]: ?
2013-02-19 [Figgy]: Lep/Sam in limbo.
2013-02-20 [Lepellier]: Yeah, I did it because of a question I had on the other page.
2013-02-20 [Roma]: It has been answered, correct?
2013-02-20 [Lepellier]: Correct.
2013-03-07 [Figgy]: I'm not trying to pick on you guys, but I do wanna be picky about grammar, cause like... it's what I do. :>
Devlin... turned back to Lillium, a small flutter in his chest of excitement.
This says there is a small flutter in Devlin's chest of excitement.
Devlin has a chest of excitement here.
There is a flutter in it.
Basically, you usually, or maybe always, can't have an adjective or adjective phrase apart from the noun you're trying to describe. If you do that, your words technically end up describing the wrong noun, and you get confused readers (one of which I would be if I didn't look for this error all the time XD). So what the sentence should say is "... a flutter of excitement in his chest."
Again, not picking on you, CC, just giving a little grammar lesson, since I see lots of people do that :3
*crawls back into shameful hole*
2013-03-08 [CuteCommander]: Gah, it's me not proof-reading my posts -_- I'm a qualified teacher and a creative writing graduate, I should be better than this! Thanks Figgy, I'll keep a closer eye on it
2013-03-08 [Figgy]: It's no big deal, I was just being picky :3
2013-03-08 [CuteCommander]: And then I was an idiot in the kitchen too! I promise better
2013-04-04 [Ms. Steel]: Are Mihir and Val going to serendipitousl
2013-04-05 [Flisky]: That would be awesome. ^_^ So...maybe. Up to you, really.
2013-04-15 [Duredhel]: Uhhm... why is the elevator randomly stopping without anyone calling it? Please guys,, don't force stuff like that. If you want Aidan and anastasha to meet, have Aidan get out of his room and call the elevator on the second floor while Anastasha gets on it in the third one. Don't make up weird coincidences to force the situation, its just not good.
2013-04-15 [Haunted Fate]: Aha, alright. I just figured it would just go ahead and let me get Anastasha out of her room and all that stuffs. I'll fix it, my apologies.
2013-04-18 [Figgy]: elevator... call it.
2013-04-18 [Duredhel]: Yeah.. lep XD I get it if you're busy and stuff, but you need to read up a bit and try to be more aware of what's going on, specially if it's something you've been plotting with another player.
2013-04-18 [Lepellier]: The character that I was plotting with isn't even here...
2013-04-18 [Figgy]: .... *facepalm*
2013-04-18 [Figgy]: Seriously dude. Dur JUST told you to read up and be aware. Haunted has her waiting on the third floor because we already scolded her for having the elevator randomly stop here. Anastasha is waiting for the elevator but Aidan has to call it first before she can get here...
2013-04-18 [Figgy]: Don't think that works cause there's also a kitchen on the second floor. And the first.
2013-04-18 [Lepellier]: Aidan hasn't been here in a while, and when he was here the first time, he was living on the 3rd floor. He didn't have a great tour of the house, and is currently still drowsy, so he's going for the one that he remembers.
2013-04-18 [Figgy]: But when we changed the mansion around we said to disregard that it had been changed and play as though it had always been that way, so technically he would've lived on the 2nd floor. I get it if you say he can't think straight because he is half asleep but that isn't clarified in the post.
2013-04-18 [Lepellier]: Ok, I apparently missed the part about disregarding the layout change. I'll fix it.
2013-04-18 [Figgy]: I mean, it was a while back. We just didn't want everyone running around going "Where did all these new places come from and why did my room mysteriously change? D:"
2013-04-18 [Lepellier]: That's understandable
2013-07-18 [Figgy]: Shana Tilaru.
2013-07-18 [Flisky]: Sihana Tilaru.
2013-09-05 [Figgy]: Tory?
2013-10-19 [Ms. Steel]: Shawn post?
2013-10-23 [Ms. Steel]: but, but, but... there are TWO elevators? Unless Tory's trying to be polite. hehe.
2013-10-23 [Flisky]: Tory is indeed being polite. Because...she'
2014-05-17 [Lirerial]: Post needed :)
2014-05-17 [Figgy]: Yes, I know. Still gotta check 40 fucking notifications >_>
2014-05-17 [Lirerial]: Oh jeez. Sorry!
2014-05-24 [Flisky]: Tory totally knows. :D
2014-05-24 [CuteCommander]: As she should! Every smoking kid thinks they get away with it!
2014-05-24 [Flisky]: Mainly they all think their parents/guardi
2014-05-24 [CuteCommander]: I'm 27 and I still try to hide it from my parents :P
2014-05-24 [Lirerial]: Lol don't feel bad, I'm 22 and hide it from my parents :P
2014-05-24 [CuteCommander]: Just like mine, they blatantly know ^_~
2014-05-24 [Lirerial]: Lol idk if my parents knew I'd have gotten yelled at by now
2014-06-20 [Flisky]: Helloooo?
2014-06-23 [Nikolai-Akaykam itana]: yea?
2014-06-23 [Figgy]: It's your turn to post.
2014-06-23 [Nikolai-Akaykam itana]: ok, ill be on it in a second. ive had finals this entire week
2014-06-23 [Figgy]: Euhmm... Justin didn't teleport on this page, did he?
2014-06-23 [Nikolai-Akaykam itana]: I mustve misread it, rewrite?
2014-06-23 [Figgy]: Please.
2014-06-23 [Nikolai-Akaykam itana]: will do
2014-06-27 [The Black Goat]: I will have to post tomorrow Dur, super sorry for limbo, got cut off by family things
2014-06-28 [The Black Goat]: Ty for the move up, sorry for the crappy post, typing on phone sucks and causes me to loose cohesiveness in my writing -_-
2014-07-01 [Duredhel]: Isn't vincent only like.. 4 inches taller than Dani? XD
2014-07-01 [The Black Goat]: Well damn, for some reason I always pictured Dani being short XD
2014-07-01 [The Black Goat]: We'll she's like 5.6 right? Had to go do math, but he's six feet so he does have half a foot on her
2014-07-01 [Ms. Steel]: 5.6 feet is equivalent to about 5'7", so he's roughly 5 inches taller... so she's kinda on the high end of 'normal' for an American female (5' 4"-ish being the average height).
2014-07-01 [The Black Goat]: I meant 5 foot six inches, but I think she is closer to 5.7 XD
I can fix it if you'd like Dur, I'm not sure why I just assumed she was like my height IRL
2014-07-01 [Ms. Steel]: I meant to say 1.7 m is about 5.6 ft, which is 5'7", give or take. I am a fan of online converters. hehe.
2014-07-01 [Duredhel]: No worries XD. I think it stemmed from me writing Dani's height in metric.
2014-07-24 [Figgy]: Shana being all authoritative sucks :S
2014-07-24 [Ms. Steel]: Awww.
2014-07-24 [Ms. Steel]: Well, at least she didn't have to kick him out of the house. Yet.
2014-07-24 [Figgy]: Ahahaha XD
2014-07-25 [The Past]: Oh, there will be kicking involved, just maybe not out of the house, heh.
2014-07-25 [Ms. Steel]: tee hee!
2014-07-25 [Figgy]: I think ancient has something planned with Coral and Gavin in the 1st center hallway? Maybe? So I'mma wait to post with Shana again.
2014-07-25 [The Past]: No problem :)
2014-07-25 [ancienteye]: No, feel free to bring them downstairs. :P Having an audience wouldn't stop Gavin from yelling /or/ Coral from hugging. XD
2014-07-30 [The Black Goat]: isn't flame downstairs taking coral into the waiting room to talk about what happened with kyle and addy?
2014-07-30 [Duredhel]: I think you're right. Her leaving the area was in Shana's post so I missed it.
2014-07-30 [The Black Goat]: I'm just happy I'm right for once XD made my day!
;)
2014-09-28 [ancienteye]: "he led this unsuspecting girl to his room"
...
<__<
2014-09-30 [The Black Goat]: yepp, we've reached a whole new level of creepy
2014-09-30 [Figgy]: very creeps, much scary
2014-09-30 [ancienteye]: XD
2014-09-30 [CuteCommander]: What happened to Shawn's post?
2014-09-30 [Figgy]: This one?
Stepping out of the elevator, Shawn quickly peeked around the hallway before heading over to the doorway through to X-Men East 2nd.
2014-09-30 [CuteCommander]: Oh, woah, a lot of posting has happened. I thought it had been deleted XD
2015-01-19 [Kalma]: Does anybody know if there's anybody in this room? ^_^;
2015-01-19 [Ms. Steel]: Echo? But Dur might currently be on a hiatus...
2015-01-19 [Ms. Steel]: I could bring a character out if you'd like.
2015-01-19 [Figgy]: I think he mentioned something about having Echo speak to Ez. I'll ask him about it.
2015-01-21 [Kalma]: Ok! I'll leave her floating around here
2015-01-31 [Kalma]: Huzzah!
2015-02-01 [Figgy]: If you two wanna continue this, lemme know.
2015-02-04 [Kalma]: Our characters interaction? I'd like to keep it up.
2015-02-10 [Kalma]: Is it ok if I c&p the previous couple of paragraphs of meeting and greeting between Ez and Echo?
2015-02-10 [Figgy]: Sure, you can use what you need to in the X-Men RP Archives :)
2015-05-19 [The Past]: Want me to carry on without Echo? Or wait?
2015-05-20 [Figgy]: I'll ask Dur.
2015-10-01 [Kalma]: Hi, I'm alive, how are you all : )
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